In March after recieving our final coursework grades me aswell as Shanyse Johnson, Hollie Gilbert and Nick Riley had subsquently decided to resubmit our work, as we aspire to improve our grades, we intend to do this through alterations to different areas of our work, such as the movie trailer itself, extended information on our blogs, aswell as endavouring to make our evaluation better, we hope that this will help us achieve better marks.
The critical commentry we have recieved has enabled us to acknowledge how and what we need to improve on. We will be substituting aswell as adding to our trailer, as our audience had brought to our attention that there was alot of repetition throughout the trailer aswell as an unclear story line thus leading the audience to confusion, in order to amend this we will be adding more dialog, however this dialog will be short and simple, yet the words used will be effective as well as suspensive, in order to heighten our audiences mood. We will also be reducing the amount of unnecessary, prominent shots, such as the shots of the protagonist running around in London.
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