Alterations to Final Movie Trailer

We have made an immense change in our trailer, in order to make it more realistic aswell as appealing. With the consideration of our audience feedback on our orginial trailer, we have made alterations concerning these.

Addition:

Dialogue was a major downfall with our trailer as there wasnt enough of it before. We have added new scenes of a conversation between Mia and her friend at work, containing dialogue relevant to the concept of the plot, it helps move the trailer along, as it introduces the plot and our villian. We have also added in the green screen with the age certificate on, aswell as the production company logo, we wanted to add these features in our first submission, however we were unable to, due to the time limit we had, we have now added these in, in order to make our trailer look proficient.


Subtraction:

Many of our feedbacks stated that the storyline was intricate to understand, due to the repetition of shots, of Mia running in London and Brett being tortured, many didnt seem to understand the concept of breaking the conventions as it wasnt reflected clearly in the trailer, so in order to make our piece understand able we had decided to take out some of these shots and add new ones in which contained dialogue between Mia and her friend.


Dialogue & Sound :

As dialogue was a major issue in our orginial piece, and we had realised that it was cruicial in making the storyline regconisable, therefore we found it nessicary to add new dialogue in that will relate to what our trailer is trying to convey. We added a new scene of Mia having a discussion with her work mate explaining her worrys for Brett:


Elena: Mia.... Whats wrong?
Mia: I havent heard from him in two days and its not like him.

This was a quick scene but reflects the conventions of a thriller movie, the start of the storys disequilibirum, aswell as the stereotypical characters, which eventually changes within her conversation with the villian.

Mia: Mia SLT Ldt
Dean: We have him!
Mia: Where is he?
Dean:....
Mia: I dunno who you are but please dont hurt him.
Dean:You have 24hours until his time runs out!

Through this next scene we see the progress of Mia's confidence which is depicted in her speech, she subtly makes it obvious to us that she will be the herorine in the movie, and Dean very clearly makes us regconise that he is the villian. The shots that dont contain dialogue in the movie is moved along through the music. We had added in another non-diegetic music, which even though was very simplictic, still and composed, created suspense and tention, making it somewhat threathening and disturbing. It also combined well against the shots used, showing her struggle in finding him. However as the trailer progressed we intertwined it very subtly with a faster pace of music, emphasising the sense lost, struggle, distress and tention as the disequilibirum unfolds towards the end causing the audience to feel anxiety.

Music: The Dragster Wave and Code Breakers