Plot 2

We made some alterations to our plot, after a long group discussion we decided that our plot needed some more work on it, so this is what we have come up with:
Holly was an ordinary 20 year old. Fresh out of the university of Greenwich. Holly's life was great she had a much desired job with times magazine and a handsome boyfriend who she adored. On the night of her 21st birthday she celebrated with all of her friends at a club, the night was young but mike holly's boyfriend could not contain himself, in the middle of this packed party he got onto one knee and proposed to his darling holly. The happy couple headed home but mike needed to fill the car with petrol, they stopped off at the nearest petrol station and filled up, she went in to pay. That was when holly's great night turned bad. She turned with a smile to her boyfriend but he didn't smile back. He was being dragged into a blacked out Mercedes and all holly could do was scream. Trying to find him brings up many obstacles which means every step that she takes, is another step towards never seeing him again. An epic love tale about a girls fight for true love!